Year 13 feedback for first draft Friday

Feedback we received:

• Some people were confused about the part Beth and Drea played in the band
• Some people didn't like the studio shots
• Others said get rid of the black and white

Changes we will make:

• We are going to include more shots of Beth and Drea playing instruments to make it clearer we are musicians and producers and shout about our producing skills on the blog
• We will replace the above shots with some of the studio shots
• We have already played around with the colours of the video and gotten rid of some black and white (see below second draft post)

Overall feeling:

• Great lip syncing comments
• Looks professional
• Editing goes with the beat of the music
• Loved underwater shots
• Good locations
• Great range of locations
• Visuals suit the music
• Good use of shots and angles
• Underwater shots in reverse are effective 

Scores out of 40 (in order from lowest to highest):
25
28
28
28
28
30
30
30
31
31
31
32
33
34
34
35
36
36
38
39