Music video first draft: edited from feedback

After feedback we received from the original first draft, we have made the following changes:

• We have gotten rid of most of the black and white effects and played around with the colours of the beach shots using the RGB curves colour editor in premier. We have found that this looks much better and the beautiful weather on the day is highlighted
• We have also gotten rid of the noise grain effect on the pool shots and made the blue stand out much more using the RGB curves colour editor in premiere. This looks much better, the shots stand out more and the blue looks effective
• We have included more shots of Beth and Drea producing the track in a music room a little more and more shots of all three of us to make it clearer we are producers and musicians in the girl band not main vocalists

Here is the result: