Halfway feedback presentations for other groups

Class halfway feedback for other groups

Alleyways 
Overall Stage Presence, Confidence/talent/personality
Came across as a confident band, very well thought through presentation with each person taking turns to talk. Seem to know what they are about and great image.

Music Video idea  
Didn't explain their idea which was a let down as we were looking forward to seeing how they work with the song :)

Website/Digipak
Love the idea for the digipak, some more images of the band would have been great.

Music Genre
They explain that they're a electronic, alternative group in the opening.

Unique selling point 

They explain that the group consists of 2 boys and 2 girls which isn't commonly seen in the music industry.

Any other comments? what are they doing well?
Seem organised with their image, just need to sort out music video idea :)

Cosmo                

Artist Profile

Not a lot about the actual artist; build a profile through interviews etc, as images not enough to be recognized as successful artist

Music video

More concept/performance based. Strange idea, will be very difficult to pull off, but will look amazing if you manage it

Website

Not shown, Facebook looks okay, maybe change the banner?

Unique selling point

Not a lot of popular psychedelic artists in today’s society

Any other comments? what are they doing well?

Build a profile for Cosmo by staging interviews, building a graphically successful website

Alex Echo                        

Artist Profile

A lot of background information on Echo, good background as an indie artist, more pictures perhaps

Music video

Graphic match of people’s story lines joining up, good idea, but not very well explained

Website

Twitter feed strong; lots of photos and posts

Unique selling point

Indie singer songwriter from Essex is pretty unique

Any other comments? what are they doing well?

Perhaps hold a few photo shoots